Rolling in sticky goo, dragging her long tail along the ground my creature has the most smartest brain ever. She has terrifying wings she has such sharp teeth that it only takes one bite to eat a slippery slug. Her claws are so sharp that they can dig right through the walls. This creature is mean, bossy and incredibly disgusting. When she gets angry her face gets red like a rose then she turns into a bat and flies far away. She finds a tree and makes a little nest then she flies back. Her name is little Miss Brainstein.
What a lovely description, right from the grabby opening line. I can see the unlovely Miss Brainstein very clearly and wish she'd come and deal with the slippery slugs in my garden! One small point - it should be 'smartest' not 'most smartest'.
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