Thursday, October 24, 2013

Joshy Y4 100wc NZ


One windy night in a little village was a boy named Lucas. It was the windiest day in the country. There was the thickest Tornado ever. Lucas was so scared that he was staring at the Tornado. The tornado approached him closer and closer. The house ripped off the ground. Lucas's family got sucked in. The day after the day the Tornado came was a sunny day. Lucas survived the tornado everybody else died. It was so hot. slowey  dream land. Lucas woke up and was on top of a horse.

3 comments:

  1. I loved the ending of your story Joshy, it really takes you by surprise ! Robyn

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  2. nice work Joshy !!!!

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  3. I love the way you described "the thickest tornado". Great work! Mrs R

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