...The violent storm was geting worse every second...On halloween night! There were two little girls going Trick or treating, their names were Violette and Lulu. They were very fond of going trick or treating together because they were very good friends! Also they were vampires so they didn’t have to dress up. They had to dress up when they went to school there was one thing they looked very beautiful at school. These girls were very genourise! Though they didn’t like hurting they just liked tricking. But not jokes that hurt. Also jokes that got them in troble.
Lovely story Lucy and Rose ..looking forward to hearing more
ReplyDeleteThey sound nice vampires! Try to construct your story so it has a beginning, middle and end. This started excitingly with the Halloween storm and I expected something scary or unexpected to happen, but nothing did.
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