Zooming across the race track half way on the final f-1 lap the violent storm was getting closer. It was huge gigantic windy tornado it was rampaging threw the race sucking every think up and it hit the racers up too. There was no survivors except Cohen and Cooper. The whole stadium crumbled slowly down then there was no such thing as F-1. Went home hopping it was a dream. I woke up oh I am glad that is a dream I went down stairs and had breakfast. As I was hugging mom and lived happily ever after.
Andy Knill Team 100WC. Thanks for the story Cohen and Cooper. Please look back at adding some more punctuation to add pauses in your tale. I am glad that it was just a bad dream.
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