Boom it was a big tornado100 and 50 people die. It was a big giant it was a wizard. He made spells in his lear. The lear is in the sewer. Just when the whole city almost crumbled Ted and Rory came to save the day, they punched him but it didn’t hurt. He pushed us into a building, it really hurt! Ted hes unstoppable. NO he isn’t said ted.The giant punched us in the face. Now is he unstoppable said Rory.Yes said Ted.Then we made a posion.We used it on the giant he fell and died yay we said.
Cam I really liked your story Barney it was amazing
ReplyDeleteMrs H (team 100wc)
ReplyDeleteA good story and an interesting response to the prompt.
Remember to use speech marks when your characters are talking and it will be even better writing!
Keep up the good work.