Just when I thought everything couldn’t get eny more worse the sky slowly got darker, I felt like I was in a curse, I thought for a minute just then lightning struck ZAP!!! The lightning hit the ground and formed a big crack. Then the thunder came BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! Drip Drip Drip rain instantly came pouring down.High winds were blowing and roofs started flying off houses I couldn’t see a thing I could only hear peple screaming and crying. Then everything stopped. It was a lovely summers morning mabey it was just a dream or was it? BOOM!!!
What an exciting story Esme and Immi. You both have a great imagination! Keep up the terrific writing!
ReplyDeleteI love your story Esme and Immi. It's full of suspense and scary and makes you want to know what happens next! Look forward to more of your stories :)
ReplyDeleteI like the use of the words : I felt like I was in a curse.
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