Friday, October 18, 2013

Flynn 100 wc Y4 NZL

In a small house a kid called Danny was playing on his tablet one night then suddenly...the window opened as in what or who could it be?  It was his little sister Amy then she said“Please don’t tell anyone Danny’‘then there was a big BOOM!  then Danny’s tablet lost signal what could it be it was the sound of an Alien invasion zaping people into Aliens and all you could hear was people screaming but then a brave kid called Flynn , Danny’s best mate and he had seen Aliens before so he knew there weakness he won!


4 comments:

  1. That is an awesome story Flynn - can't wait to read more in this challenge. Mum.

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  2. very funny flynn i like how he wasn't ready for the aliens

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  3. that BOOM was loud. Josh R

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  4. What was Amy doing outside? Is she an alien too? - Lucas

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