Friday, October 18, 2013

Poppy 100wc Y3 NZ


I closed my eyes suddenly I herd a foot step coming from down stairs I opened my eyes and I jumped to the staircase and ran down stars and I checked the kitchen I looked in the rooms and then I new it. It was coming from out side. I ran to the door and opened it. As soon as I opened it I got out of the door I felt a huge freezing breeze running through my hear. I looked up at the sky and the sky was getting darker and darker because the clouds were covering my head.

2 comments:

  1. very
    awesome story Poppy! Also nice choice of words!

    Lucy

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  2. Very interesting. Rose Wells

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