Thursday, December 12, 2013

George Y3 100wc NZL

This day had been a odd one. For starters a loud noise had been heard all ‘round the world. Then it rose to an ear-wining crescendo...then the noise stopped. A landing craft had landed in America to talk with representatives of all the countries. The representatives flew into America to talk with extra-terrestrial beings. It was two days before the news got to us. The news was a bit depressing and a bit happy. The news was that they needed food for war but the food they asked for we had never heard of before, so we sent them off with a”we don’t have any”.

Flynn and Solomon Y4 NZL

Up in space there were two little babies called Flynn and Solomon who were on a mission to find a new planet with life.Until ... they found a new planet and named it Utanium. Before long they had landed on there new planet but it had a new planet had a screeching noise and then the noise stopped.then the aliens slowly turned around and saw the two boys. The boy thought the aliens would attack them but they stayed back for some strange reason. But one of the aliens let out a cry. “AAAHHHRRROOO!’’ So they were all forced to retreat.

Elsie & Gala Y3

“One,two,three...” SPLASH! I dived off the wharf and then noise stopped I saw shoals of rainbow fish, puffer fish...What was that fish in the distance? it was a...  SHARK!  quickly I swam for my life. I soon realised that I wasn’t going to the shore, I was facing the deep ocean. I was in panic but I had a shark at my heels.  I looked behind me, the shark had gone. I sighed with relief (ok I guess you can’t sigh underwater, but you know what I mean). I turned around then stared in horror , there was the shark facing me with it’s piercing eyes and sharp jaws...

Monday, December 9, 2013

Cooper 100wc y4 NZL


Boom! The tail from the plane got ripped off and the plan crash-landed. The tail was 100km away from the plane. Katie's dad had two broken legs so he cod-not walk. Katie dad said “do  you now were we are’’ “no sir’’ said kati. “this is earth’’ said Katie dad. Askant went into the forest every step Kati will her a roar. Then the nose stopped. it was a monster’’said kati. Then kati heard the monster again. then kati  found the tail and got a bike and went home to his planet.

IMOGEN & ESvME 100wc y3 nz


Isabella was lying  in bed it was christmas eve and she  was listening to all the wonderful noises around her , like birds singing in the rustling trees and the music coming from next door abruptly the noise stopped...something fell down the chimney  I know, it is santa claws. She was right. She fell right to sleep. In the morning she saw a sparkling present beside her bed.She picked up the present and ran into the living room where her parents were waiting for her. She opened the present it was a...pineapple no I thought it was a puppy how about a pineapple called puppy are you crazy what kind of pineapple has a name ok how about a puppy called pineapple good idea!

Rose & Ana 100 wc y3 nzl


On a mysterious Monday morning four toddlers could Milly, Molly, Macy and Micky Mouse all went to the daycare of Alaska. They were all best friends but everyone thought Macy was the kindest. Micky and Molly Were the naughtiest and Milly was very kind to. On there 7th birthday there two big presents were two puppy dogs one caviler king Charles spaniel and one cocker spaniel. One day they were growling and barking with there puppies ... and then the noise stopped they were in great danger from there mum and dad what was wrong and what trouble they were in.

Joshua 100 word challenge Y3 NZ


A mystery was happing at tornado town, if you don’t know what tornado town is, it’s filled with tornados everywhere like buildings out of tornados. there was going to be a noise festafull to how great the noise helped to build buildings and shops even materials but then the noise stopped every thing was quiet someone was making the noise stop but as they knew what to do they made some noise then the noise continued everyone was happy.... well except from the one who made the noise stopped but anyways that brings the  noise festafull to the end and us.

Ming Y4


BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! I heard that sound and I was wondering where that sound come from and what is that sound.  So a little boy called josh followed that sound to a place have lot of deep and big holes. when that little boy stand there about one minute and then the boom noise stopped just then josh saw two aliens saying to jack “King go back to your own planet.” Then I yawned “I won’t go to another planet the earth is my planet and I love the earth so I’m not going to another planet.” The two aliens court josh then go back to josh’s own planet. 

Rory 100wc Y3 NZ


Two kids were walking in the forest and a big storm flashed there eyes like dimness in disguise.The storm stopped but the noise didn't the noise stopped in two hours.Billy and Milly was scared when they saw eyes in the darkness in the forest it came nearer and nearer until it was beside them and it pounced at them and took them into his lear.They woke up an hour later they were so scared. They saw him and it said I came to save you a beast was two minutes from you.Thank you they said.

Lucas 100wc Y4 NZL


Everyday this man used to go for walks, up mountains, in-between hills. But one day he tried a cave. The cave looked very Yucky and slimy but he went in anyway. When he was walking through the cave, SUDDENLY! He realised the marks on the slimy rock. Then he got his glasses on, and started to read the marks, and you know how he can read the marks because he is a very professional scientist. “OMG it can be it’s the most legendary cave ever!’’ strata-way! He called te papa and said “I have found the most legendary cave come quick and collect the rock".

LUCY POPPY 100 wc. year 3

Lucy, Poppy, Ana and Rose were having a party together. Then a lightning came hurtling down from the dark blue sky. Then the noise stopped. Then the girls started screaming, Like an astroid hit the world. finally the girls stopped screaming. Then all of a sudden the lights went out they carried on screaming. Lucy's parents came down and said “calm down, guys we’ll get out all our torches 
and all our candles and we’ll be absolutely fine.”They all sat around the fire and they were all right. Then Lucy said “ Next time we have a sleepover I hope it’s as fun as this!

Wednesday, December 4, 2013

RUBY&ALEX 100WC NZ YEAR3

I was lying in bed listening to how they much fun they were having at the party...they  were so noisy in a second that she didn’t realise the music stopped & started again.What was going on at that strange house? She screamed then she jumped out of bed and ran down stairs & out the door. It was pitch black...she saw something...it was a man. She was trying to think who it could be “its him I need to leave right now .She ran back home she was lying in bed from that day it was a mystery.  

Barney and Joshi Y3 & Y4 100wc NZ


In year 2005 in the boxing world championship Skull Crusher V.S Bone Bender in the World Cup Final. Beep, Beep went the siren Skull Crusher punches Bone Bender right in the face. Bone Bender punches Skull Crusher in the arm so hard he bends his bone. Seconds out shouts the feff all the corner men get off the court and the game carry’s on. The score 2, 1 To Skull Crusher no wonder every one was cheering for him. Bone Bender does the kidney punch and gets him 2 point ahead so the score 2, 3 and then the noise stopped.Every one was shocked.

Barney M 100wc Y4 NZ


Once there was two boys Harry and Harrison. Harry said “I know lets through a party  at the haunted house. Harrison said “Who are we going to invite?” Harry said “Will, Toby, Rebecca, Ella, Layla, Lucas, Josh, Joshy, Joshua, Rory, Ted, Cam, CJ and Barney M.” “That’s a lot of people.” said Harrison. Later that night nearly all of the children came except Barney M, Josh and Lucas. They must have gone to a real haunted house...Barney heard a noise in the haunted house ad followed the noise. It was a ghost. Immediately the ghost sucked Barney’s soul out and he was dead. So did Josh and Lucas.

Myles and Ted YR3 NZL


Just as Fred the D.J turned up the music to full blast a lightning bolt struck the power line that was connected to Billy’s house.  After a few seconds the noise stopped after four minutes of silence and complete darkness Billy wondered if the lights were ever going to come back on. Finally Fred said “I,m going to get an engineer” “but the power isn’t working” “don’t worry I have a friend called Ned the sleepy head he is an engineer he can get our power back on." Fred’s friend came to there house and he fixed it yay.

Cam100wcNZL


“This is a good party.” “Ha Ha your in for tag” “Here come the army” As the army of minions come out...suddenly the sky fell to black, and all the lights, went out and smash in to sharp glass. And as that happened. Suddenly then the noise stopped. The minions went crazy because they kept smashing into walls. “ This is horrible now since this has happened to this party.’’ “Sorry everyone I have an announcement to make you have to go home now.”  As everyone left the lights came on again. And so they had a big party again.

Josh R 100wc y3 NZL


 It was a beautiful spring day but a noisy one to. I went down to the beach and dived into the water and then the noise stopped it was so quiet all I herd was the fish flapping their fins but then I saw a big shadow IT WAS A SHARK!! I swam away as fast as I could but it grabbed me and started throwing me around I finally got out of his jaws. I wasn’t bleeding because it was the lips not the teeth. I swam up to the surface and it was noisy again.

Cj 100wc NZL Y3


Hi my name is David and I have my own detective agency.Right now my case is a robber who is hiding lots of money in his hideout.I’m dressed all in black and I’m climbing up the side of the hut.There is a conversation going on inside I nearly heard a word and then the noise stopped. A door opened and a man with a flash light walked out and pulled me off the wall then I fainted.When I came to I was hurled into a car luckily I had a phone and I called the police to come really fast. 

Cohen 100 wc Room 15 y4


Boom ca pow! " What was that!? Its from the neighbours house! " Why is there no light on!?  Im going to check it out but i am going to need some equipment like a torch, so I can see in the dark." Then the noise stopped I put my torch on to see what direction I was heading.  I tripped on the the road and saw a jack-o-lantern and I saw monsters in their. I was brave enough to go in I walked in I saw a skeleton I spoke to him he said "Halloween!" oh I walked home.