Thursday, October 24, 2013

CJ Y3 100wc NZ

This cold blooded creature is the meanest of its species. The fang dragon has a giagantic head the size of a school bus and fangs as big as a desk. This slimy colossal flying serpent has dazzling yellow eyes for night vision.When this dragon is irratible spikes on his massive tail appear. This dragons only weakness is when being tickled on the tummy. The fang dragon the fang dragon has four eyes and can see in all directions. The fang dragon can eat anything the size of a slide or smaller.If you ever see him you better call ‘ run!‘His wings are like giant doors.

4 comments:

  1. wow Cj i like who you used the meanest of its species

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  2. CJ, you have used some exciting words from the thesaurus very effectively. I particularly like 'irritable' (angry) and 'colossal' (huge).
    I have noticed that a lot of your sentences start with 'This' or 'The'. Next time try to use some different sentence starters.

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  3. I love the idea of spikes appearing on an animal's body when they are irritable.

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  4. This is great CJ. I really like the details your have added. Well done!

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