One stormy night when hurricane like winds were blowing and gigantic rain drops were hitting the roof like cricket balls slowly the sky got darker. The walls were shuddering and lightning was crackling like rampaging light. The wind was so strong it blew over everything in its path. my bed was shaking violently that night, I got no sleep at all.That morning I sprinted downstairs then opened the door and ran onto the street and saw destruction everywhere.There was a tree on a car sticks and seaweed on the road trampolines had been blown onto neighbours roofs boats had crashed.
CJ,
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful story and very expressive. I bet you have seen some fantastic storms this winter to help along this creative writing.
Dianne
i love all your awesome words! I hope no one got hurt it's realy realistic!
ReplyDeleteWOW!!!C.J.Really good story it was an awesome introduction and really exciting all the way through just like a professional writer.Barney C
ReplyDeleteHI CJ, I love your use of descriptive words - those gigantic raindrops, and the rampaging light. I remember that night it was pretty scary wasn't it? Sue
ReplyDeleteThe rain must of been pretty loud as well.Cam
ReplyDeleteI can not wait to hear more......Rose
ReplyDeleteI love how you used the word destruction.
ReplyDeleteThere were so many effective words in your writing! Lucas
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