All of a sudden we were plunged into darkness...Milly and Molly stopped playing cards. wind howled, lightning came out of no where and struck the earth. Slowly the sky got darker as something fell with a crash that shook the house. Milly screamed as Molly just dodged a piece of celling that was falling. Dad rushed in “quick get out, the oak tree fell on the house quickly!’‘ The girls dashed outside. “oh no’’ Molly moaned ‘’ this is terrible ‘’Milly complained. “How much money will it take to repair this?” sighed Dad. ‘Can I get my jacket please’.
Gala and Alex,
ReplyDeleteThis storm sounded pretty scary. I'm glad nobody got hurt.
I liked your use of speech marks.
Dianne
Great story Gala and Alex. Really well written - I could easily imagine being in your house, your descriptions were so realistic. Very scary! :)
ReplyDeleteYou have used great words they fit in space verey well ruby
ReplyDeleteDads are always worried about money!!
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