One strange day two little girls called Lucy and Ana went to Lucy’s house. They were playing in the Lounge when ... they saw a very strange looking ship out the window. “look it looks like an old USA army boat.” Then Ana said “ Lucy Lucy look it has guns on it.” Slowly the sky got darker. “ Dinner time girls” Lucy’s mum shouted! For diner they had:Tomatoes with pasta.Then all of a sudden the lights went out And.Everything went ship shaped.Then they all started hearing gun noises.So they make a dash for it and ran and did not stop
at all.
Wow what an entertaining story. I wonder what happened to them. I like the 'ship shaped' joke too!
ReplyDeleteKate (Ana's mum)
I loved how you ended the story.
ReplyDeleteAnd I like the way you wrote all of a sudden instead of saying suddenly the lights went out. It really made your story flow.
I liked it when everything went ship shaped Elsie
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