one stormy night there were two girls called Ruby and poppy they were playing there favourite game. All of a sudden the lights went out it was pitch black they were so freaked out of there bodies . the violent storm was getting louder , stronger and more scary . they heard a thud then a big smash, the chandelier fell to the floor then a big strip of lightening came... The storm calmed down until they heard a thump thump thump. I wonder what that was? Something was happening above their heads. what could it be whats happing to us they screamed!!!
wow i loved how you used pitch black ANA.
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ReplyDeleteLoved the story !!!!!!