Thursday, October 24, 2013

George Y3 100wc NZ

The cool blooded creature is 1.67 meters in length. Its flickering green eyes are the last thing its prey sees before it dies. Its body shape is like that of a snake. It feeds upon farm animals that live on nearby farms.60 thin trails of slime shoot menacingly out of each scale. Inside its mouth are 6 fangs that gleam in the moonlight.Fur coated legs pin down any prey within a 50 cm radius.When it screams it sends a low moaning.Its head is as sharp as a razor bladeIts fur flashes gold as it stalks through snow and undergrowth.

2 comments:

  1. You use new vocabulary very effectively George. I love the sentence - 'fur coated legs pin down any prey within a 50cm radius.'
    Next time, add a space after a full stop when typing so that your writing isn't so bunched up.

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  2. Gruesome vocabulary, George - nice and spine-tingly!

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