I found something that looks like a stone with a cloud inside. It had lightening and thunder until it broke. It rose up to the sky making a storm it was violent. The violent storm was terrifying and unbelievable. I was horrified and scared I hate storms that are violent and rainy and stormy. The waves were big and strong. The tree blocked the road and all the cars stopped. A bolt of lightning struck onto a house roof then another it went to the cloud and electricity was on the cloud until it turned back into a stone hurray!
Woah! Joshua this is quite a scary piece of writing. What an awful sounding storm. I was pleased to see the 'Hooray!' at the end once the storm had disappeared back into the stone.
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ReplyDeleteHow frightening. I like your short sentences with plenty of descriptive words. well done Joshua.
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