It was slowly getting darker. The wolves were howling, the walls were shaking, the windows were cracking. I was scared. I was in Russia on Holiday. It was noon in the morning it was a big storm. In the morning I went out side it was chaos. I was amazed. Mum and Dad were asleep.They would be amazed. Everyone came out on the street and tidied up. I helped my next door neighbour get a tree off his car. Someone got glass in his eyes. He went to the hostpital. I felt bad for him. We tidied up everything on the street.
Very expressive and quite scary. Lots of good adjectives. If that happened in real life you would actually be freaked out.
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I feel bad for the guy who got glass in his eye as well. Ted
ReplyDeleteWow Rory - excellent story - especially your first sentence which was awesome. I loved your word chaos as well. Barney and Camille
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