Coming out of the shadow is a freaky bat flying so no-one could see is the weird type bat.He is black with eyes the coulor of blood with scratures underneth.If you get close he will bite with his razor sharp fangs.His ears are sharper than a kinfe.He grabbes around branches tightly to sleep upside down in day time.Their is only one type of their species.He has two gigantic eyes to help him see in the dark.His real home is the cave of death but now his home is this haunted house that has slime everywhere on the tyled ground.
Wow, I love the move from the cave of death to the slime covered haunted house cam - what an imagination! Sue
ReplyDeleteIt is great the way you have started your piece of writing with 'Coming out of the shadow...' You don't waste any time getting straight into the action!
ReplyDeleteNext time, when typing, leave a space after a full stop to make your writing easier to read.