This cold blooded creature is the meanest of its species. It can climb faster then crawl it was the self spider .It had deadly sharp teeth with bright red blood pouring out of them.This strange type of spider lived in huge caves that even a diplodocus could fit in it. this lives in huge caves because when big predators come come looking for a new home it can hide on the dark, dark roof then it jumps off it on to its prey.P.S.This big cave is easy to find.It walks on 4 legs and is as fast as a Cheater.
I like how you used big words cohen
ReplyDeleteGreat opening sentence Barney - it really grabbed my attention. I liked your use of the words prey and predators too.
ReplyDeleteNext time I will be looking for some different sentences starters other than 'This' and 'It' to make your writing really great.