On the night of Halloween i was walking down the street collecting chocolate and lollies. As i approached the last and spookiest house of them all i knocked on the door feeling terrified.The door creaked open then i entered the spookiest house i had ever seen suddenly i saw a mean green zombie.Its brain was coming out of his head he had a big black beard growing down to his neck.He also had red veins sticking out of his arms his eyes were as big as tennis balls with big red pupils. And thats the ferocious monster that lives there.
What a wonderful description of a horrible monster - I hope I never meet anything as horrible as this! Your writing is vivid and paints a real picture for the reader. (Remember to type i as a capital letter 'I' ) Thank you for sharing this story.
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