Once in the 70s there was a sea monster who created storms but once made a violent storm. The violent storm was magnificent but ... all of a sudden ... the storm shot up into the sky like a jet at top speed!But...obviously it hit a jet so it fell down just like the meteor that wiped out all of the dinosaurs. Then it smashed the sea monster killing it and causing a cloud of poisonous gas destroying a satellite and bouncing back to Earth hitting America destroying thousands of houses and killing most people and destroying buildings.
i like how you ... for expression joshy
ReplyDeleteThis is very apocalyptic Flynn - it sounds like it is the end of the world!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you are tying all of your learning from last term too into this writing Flynn. 'Causing a cloud of poisonous gas...' painted a very vivid picture in my head,
Hello Flynn, you have used strong wow words which create some vivid pictures. Make sure your writing flows, I'm not sure the last sentence makes sense.
ReplyDeleteMrs Fairburn (Team 100WC)
Hi Flynn I love your post you have used some amazing words like violent, magnificent, poisonous, smashed. But watch out for full stops.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work
From Emily