One strange day a little girl called Ruby went trick or treating with her best friend Elise. “Hey look Elise we’ve got a basket full of lollies lets go home.”On the way home kids were running and screaming everywhere. All of a sudden the wind was whistling slowly the sky got darker. They sprinted home as fast as they could...finally they got home they knocked on the door...but no one was home. They saw something moving in the kitchen it was creeping them out ...few it was only Ruby’s little sister getting some chocolate from the fridge!
That sounds great ruby and Elsie have fun eating those lollies yum! Ruby
ReplyDeleteI love the first sentence..."one strange day"....great effort. Rose Wells
ReplyDeleteI liked it when Ruby and Elsie had a basket full of lollies,and when people were running around screaming. Elsie.
ReplyDeletethat shadow was pretty scary. Josh R
ReplyDeleteFantastic writing Ruby and Elsie! A bit scary in the middle, love the ending!
ReplyDeleteWell done girls!
Well done girls was from Ruby's mum Lisa (sorry forgot to put my name before)
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