Thursday, November 21, 2013

SOL Y4 100WC NZ

To someone out there in the Philippines I have heard your country is on verge of collapse so muritai school is kindly going to help raise money to save you and your family and I really hope that food and water gets to you also the RAF from Britain and the RNZAF have sent many planes. Filled with supplies to help you and your country to keep. The Philippines healthy and safe and lots of planes that are going to be taking people to a city in the Philippines that has not been destroyed at all have a good time.
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  1. Miss SavageNovember 21, 2013 at 11:56 AM

    I think 'verge of collapse' is right Sol, very intuitive of you.

    Have a read through and stop every time you have put a full stop. Do you see that you are stopping in the middle of sentences?

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  2. AnonymousNovember 24, 2013 at 8:38 PM

    Thank you Sol for your letter full of hope and care for the people in the Philippines.
    Remember to read over your story to check where the full stop needs to go - your first sentence is very long (I almost ran out of breath)
    I hope others read your letter and think how they can help.
    John C
    Australia

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