“What about the kid? “oh yeah, I forgot” “wait I’ve got an idea follow me” the two snuck round the back. They didn’t realise that two gleaming green eyes were watching them from the spooky haunted house, as they tiptoed through the darkness. Suddenly there was a CRACK! Then a cry and then “Help!” The kid. We have to save it before it’s too late. They devised a plan on the rooftop. Got it? Right let’s go. Wait a minute, what’s that green light? “The kid’s in danger, come on let’s do this thing.”one request can we do it like ninjas? Sigh,fine.
This is an interesting extract that follows the criteria for the challenge. I liked the way you have used dialogue in this piece and the way that you leave it on a cliffhanger.
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