“Come on Violet we’ve got to go, this is the wrong house. The person who lives here is a major enemy of mine.” “If thats the case we’d better go John ” replied Violet.They sprinted to the car and Violet started driving.They were driving so fast the doors swung outwards. Then they both started smelling something gross, like something had died. John looked back and there was a dead body in the back. Then they spotted that he was not dead in fact it was not a human it was their enemies cat. Then all of a sudden the cat pounced at the driving wheel.
Alex and Lucy,
ReplyDeleteGood work at narrating the comic strip. It is a hard thing to do.
I bet found this a bigger challenge than some of your other stories.
Keep up the good work!
Dianne
Hi Alex and Lucy,
ReplyDeleteA really entertaining (and scary!) piece of writing for the 100wc. I like the twist at the end - why did the cat pounce onto the steering wheel? Great description throughout.
Remember that a new speaker needs a new line.
Great work,
Mr Connor
Year 5 teacher
Derby, UK