Two little boy’s were thinking of a prank. and what they did for the prank is they got some plastic pants from last Halloween after that we went to get our dad’s gun boots. So what we did is we put the gum boots over the bottom of the pants. then we went to a near by river and tipped the pants and boots in to the river after we hid in the bush to see who would come past. Ten minutes later the best swimmer in NEW ZEALAND came and said i’ll save you. And we filmed her then put her on A.F.H.V.
Hello Lucas, I enjoyed reading about the practical joke that your characters set up. You include enough details of what they did and how they did it so that the reader can imagine what is happening as they read. Remember to use speech marks when a character talks in your writing. Well done :)
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