Tuesday, September 9, 2014

Taylah & Amelie 100wc y3 NZ


One day on berk it was stormy and rainy, and the people shivered as  they moved in the cold. They were riding and fixing there Dragons saddles. But Hiccup and Toothless were out riding across  the giuint seas. Then they reshed a  small  island across the coast with a big sized yellow dragon with one white spot. hiccup said "lets change it" "but its is yellow’’ so still, we can do it. So they did and with a little help from the other dragons so it was all white. They returned home from the adventeor. stork the varst said ''well done  Hiccup and Toothless.''

4 comments:

  1. Great story Amelie and Taylah. Hiccup always has fun adventures!

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  2. Hi Amelie and Taylah
    I always enjoy reading stories that have been written by partners, you can always tell where parts have been edited and improved and sharing ideas is always a good thing! You have created a very imaginative story with different characters and even a name for the island. I also think you have included the prompt very well into your story which can be tricky at times, so well done!
    Miss T team 100wc

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  3. It's Just like the movie, Taylah and Amelie!

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  4. This is a great story! Keep it up!

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