100 million years ago there lived a dragon. She was a nice dragon her name was Fire. There was a village near the dragons cave. One of the villagers yelled out "Finally we can make a start to getting that dragon."(to ride) the villagers tried day and night to get that dragon. But they couldn't. It's way too hard just for ten people. We need people from all over the world. Fire could breathe gold. "We're rich!" cried the people of the village. The dragon still got bothered but only twice a year.
Amelie,
ReplyDeleteGood story! I wanted to keep reading more about what was going to happen. I would suggest putting the reason that the villagers wanted to catch the dragon earlier in the story and before they attempt to capture the dragon. Keep up the good work!
Ms. Ferri
Fantastic story, I wish I had a gold breathing dragon!
ReplyDeleteYup! A good story. (P.S: Ignore the "Yup!" on the page.)
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