“ Finally we can make a start”I said in a relived voice.We got into the car and went to the super market and bought lots of junk food.Then I said to my dad"Lets hit the road " my dad stepped on the accelerator 240 k\h on the high way but suddenly a motor cycle crashed into a car and the driver did a flip and landed on the cars roof.I got out of the car and said " are you ok?" the man didn't reply then the ambulance came and took the man away then I got back into the car and drove home on state high way1.
What kind of junk food?
ReplyDeletecoke,sprite,chips and licrosh
DeleteOh, OK.
DeleteIt's good that the ambulance came straight away!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used a 'relieved voice' Yoshi.
ReplyDeleteBe careful of using too many 'thens' in your story again - they are beginning to creep back in.
Awesome story, buddy! I'm glad it didn't happen in real life though - wouldn't want the car scratched! I like your writing style a lot. Dad :-)
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