Once there was a land shaped as a pepper. Kiki’s crocodile took her to the pepper Island. The crocodile went back to Kiki’s house and forgot to bring Kiki with her. When coco, Kiki’s friend saw the crocodile without Kiki she swam to pepper Island to save her friend from dragons in the caves she got there just in time. Kiki helped lulu swim across the other side.When they got home they got all dry and baked delicous cupcakes and they went outside and saw people juggling fire some one was juggling oranges gave Coco and Kiki a soft lolly.
Well done, Harriet, what an imaginative 100WC! Well done for using all the words. I think you missed a full stop in your last sentence, have a look at that again. It's always a good idea to read back and check you work for capital letters and full stops if you get time. Keep up the good work!
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