100 years ago there was a crocodile that lived in a blue river,it was a very old crocodile. Once a family came to see the crocodile they saw an orange tree they picked one and fed it too the crocodile. The orange had a little bit of pepper it made the crocodile do a really big sneeze.The family forgot that crocodiles are allergic to pepper. The crocodile got out of the blue river onto the soft green grass. Everyone ran as fast as they could to get away. The crocodile was extremely old so he couldn’t eat anyone.
Thank you for doing such a wonderful job highlighting your special words. Your story is very entertaining, and i like your descriptions. Some of your sentences can a use punctuation to make the story start and stop properly. Nicely done!
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