Tuesday, September 9, 2014

Tai Y3 100wc NZ

Not so long ago, there lived a planet called Tinsyinsy. It was the smallest planet in the entire universe. Only a castle and about ten people lived there. The aliens who lived there were REALLY scared of the colour yellow. One day King Puffypants said to his servant, Blinkypinky,
“ Blinkypinky, I have got a VERY important mission for you, you have to steal a planet called Earth.” “ But it is yellow!” said Blinkypinky. “ Whats yellow?” said King Puffypants 
“ That planet you talked about!” said Blinkypinky. “ OOOOOHHHHHHH!” said King-Puffypants. “ I’m not doing it!” said Blinkypinky. “ NOOOOOOOO! My life is ruined!” screamed King Puffypants.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Tai! What a great post. I love the names you have given your planet and characters and the idea of a planet full of aliens scared of the colour yellow! You use your speech punctuation really well and I'm left wondering how King Puffypants life will be ruined without Blinkypinky capturing planet Earth ... Your 100WC would be even better if you explained why Blinkypinky thought Earth was yellow. Have a great week - Ms Hathaway, Y6 teacher, Reading, UK

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  2. HEE HEE HEE, HA HA HA!!! That story was SO FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! From Fraser.

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  3. Hey, wait a min! More kings in your story!

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