Friday, September 9, 2016

Bruno year4 100wc Eastbourne NZ

In the middle of the night bob woke up. He heard some foot steps he opened his door and rushed down stairs. But suddenly 

his mum came out and said hold your horses. But mum he said I heard something down stairs all right then but don’t be to loud. so he went down stairs and soar santa claws. but why are you here santa then he remembered it was christmas eve he raced up and told his mum. But she said your pulling my leg and I thought well what a start to the day.

1 comment:

  1. Good use of idioms Bruno. They help your writing come alive.

    Please remember to check for capital letters for names - Bob and Santa Claus.