A century ago we were waiting at army camp ‘‘OMG!!! captain theres a giant portal hovering over us’’. And theres a UFO!!! what shall we do. Its a bit risky well go through the portal. We but we might get stuck in a black hole i didint think of that. Were finely here oh no theres some space invaders theres an ak-47 one man down. Lets call for some back up bros captain Ive got some bad news communication systems have been wiped out I see the portal retreat go in the portal. Yeah freedom few i am glad that is over.
Great story, guys! I was glad that was over, too!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, I loved It how the UFO appeared but I thought It was be also risky to go through the portal as well and I ( like the first comment ) thought that it lucky that is was over ! :) By Luke Kneale Richie Tait
ReplyDeleteHarrison, you put lots of army in your stories. James.
ReplyDeleteYeah, You and Hugh like wars so mostly in every story you make, it's in a war, so maybe the next 100 word challenge you make you might wan't to make it be in the war because it's getting a bit boring now, probably for all of room 11, but apart from that great work boys!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used the word OMG!
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